#FlashTag: Shards

#FlashTag: Shards

Monologging.org invites you to help create collaborative flash fiction. The following picture-inspired story needs to be completed by Saturday, June 13th. A new line will be added daily by different authors from around the world. Find out how to submit your twist to the evolving plot by visiting the #FlashTag Submission Guidelines… Submit Free!

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#FlashTag: Shards

 

 

#FlashTag @monologging “Fill them up,” drunk Marc ordered the waitress. Lila wrapped his bleeding hand in a napkin.

#FlashTag @monologging The waitress eyed Marc’s wound, preferring to ignore his injury. She replaced the broken glass & handed Lila a towel.

#FlashTag@ Lila watched the waitress replace the broken glass & fill Marc’s to the brim. “Don’t make a scene,” she begged.

#FlashTag@ Marc took a long swig. Lila sat in silence as he emptied half the glass. “Don’t tell me don’t,” he said.

#FlashTag@NairobiCollins Parkinson’s worsening, Marc held his mind steady: It was all he could hold. Lila held too: Sickness and Health.

#FlashTag@ They were drowning. Nobody could make up their mind. “You’re still bleeding,” Lila said, squeezing Marc’s hand.

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#FlashTag: Code

#FlashTag: Code

Monologging.org invites you to help create collaborative flash fiction. The following picture-inspired story, featuring photography by Monologging artist, Ronaldo Aguiar, needs to be completed by Saturday, June 6th. Every day, different authors around the world will be selected to contribute the next line. Find out how to submit your twist to the evolving plot by visiting the #FlashTag Submission Guidelines… Submit Free!

Photo by Ronaldo Aguiar

Photo by Ronaldo Aguiar

 

 

 

#FlashTag: Code

 

#FlashTag @monologging @ Frustrated by the markings on the wall, “It’s nonsense,” Molly said.

#FlashTag @monologging “Map the puzzle, ” Professor Briggs urged his student. “Patience reveals a method. The labyrinth can be solved.”

#FlashTag@ “I can’t do it,” Molly cried. Professor Briggs’ eyes narrowed. “Can’t… Or won’t?”

#FlashTag@ L.O.P What does that even mean? It must be an acronym but for what? Library of Parliament. But what’s there?

#FlashTag@ The house was a tablet on which a serious message was scrawled. Each corner a new line. Dr. Briggs: The architect.

#FlashTag@ Dr. Briggs sighed, backing up to the wall. Molly didn’t see him pull the light switch. New letters stood out in the dark.

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Big Screen Streaming: Maggie

Big Screen Streaming: Maggie

-Film Reviewed by Roger Market

Maggie is the latest film to capitalize on Hollywood’s obsession with zombies. Despite some imperfections, the movie manages to stand out from the undead crowd. This limited-release is a slow-burning family drama and contains relatively few zombies. Maggie features Arnold Schwarzenegger as viewers have never seen him before—as a devoted father, determined to make his daughter’s last moments as normal, safe, and loving as possible.

Wade Vogel has spent two weeks looking for his teenage daughter, Maggie, who was infected with the zombie virus during a trip to the city. Maggie has been forced to stay in a hospital, but Wade has a doctor friend who helps them escape as long as Wade promises to take Maggie to quarantine when the virus progresses. Wade takes her home to the rural Midwest so she can live out her final days with him and her stepmother Caroline. Maggie is understandably emotional but is also calmer than one might expect. She cries a little but doesn’t let her affliction completely ruin her remaining time with her family.

The ponderous opening sequence is the first indication of the film’s slow pace. Maggie lacks a clear inciting incident, although several moments could qualify: when Wade picks up Maggie from the hospital; when a zombie (one of the few in the movie) attacks Wade at an abandoned gas station on their way home; and when Wade and Maggie finally make it home. Then the stigma of infection rears its ugly head, as the youngest siblings are sent to their aunt’s house for safe-keeping until Maggie dies. Caroline seems terrified of the virus. These moments could all serve as the catalyst that sets the movie in motion, but the third is the most powerful despite its relatively late appearance.

The beginning of Act Two is much clearer and actually quite touching, albeit unsettling. After Maggie falls off a swing and injures her finger, Caroline tries to stitch her up. She quickly realizes that she needs to call a doctor, because Maggie’s injured finger is already rotting and eventually begins to ooze blood. While Caroline is calling the doctor, Maggie decides to cut off her finger. Bleeding and horrified, Maggie runs out of the house to the woods, where she encounters a father and daughter zombie.

Wade takes care of the threat, but now the questions regarding Maggie’s fate are unavoidable. How will she meet her end? Will she have any control over herself? As the movie progresses, Maggie’s body gradually deteriorates, and the viewer learns more details about quarantine and the medical cocktail that’s meant to prolong life as an almost-zombie.

Meanwhile, Maggie spends time with her friends, including her infected and nearly-changed boyfriend, Trent. He’s the only person she knows who understands what she’s going through and who can help her cope. Even after facing direct discrimination from a friend, he shows compassion: “He’s just afraid,” Trent says. Maggie isn’t quite so forgiving. All of this leads to a bittersweet conclusion that, although expected, is both devastating and beautiful.

Abigail Breslin—whose work in the comedy Little Miss Sunshine earned her several award nominations and wins as a young actress—turns in a fine performance as the title character in Maggie. She demonstrates an impressive ability to tap into several emotions at once, from solemn to terrified to indifferent to loving. Schwarzenegger, too, shows range. He’s believable and likable as a conflicted father who wants to spend time with his dying daughter but knows how dangerous she’s becoming. His fear is understated and appears gradually, but it’s there, and it’s compelling. British actress Joely Richardson plays Caroline with a passable American accent, just as she’s done in previous roles. The strength of her performance in Maggie is her ability to connect with and portray a woman under great stress, a woman who wants to see the upside but struggles with the frightening truth of her situation.

Considering that Maggie is currently playing in only 79 theaters, it may be difficult to catch. However, if you can get tickets at a nearby location, give it a shot next weekend. It’s not a bad way to spend 95 minutes. This low-budget movie has some structural issues, but it’s a decent, relatively clean entry in a zombie landscape filled with gore. If you enjoy the tropes of the zombie story but love the realistic appeal of the family drama, Maggie could be just what you’re looking for. And if you simply want to see Schwarzenegger in a new type of role, this is definitely the movie for you.

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Houndmouth

Houndmouth

-Album Reviewed by Diana Mumford

Warm weather is here and the time is right to grab your mason jars and a bottle of whiskey, kick back on the front porch, and give a listen to Houndmouth. Houndmouth is a quartet out of New Albany, Indiana, consisting of Matt Myers (guitar), Katie Toupin (keyboard), Zak Appleby (bass), and Shane Cody (drums). All four band members contribute vocals, creating beautiful harmonies that pack venues. Likewise, Houndmouth’s eclectic style and diverse sound derives from collaborative songwriting among the band members. Think Edward Sharpe and the Magnetic Zeroes meets Bob Dylan with a sprinkling of the Mamas and the Papas and you’ve got .

Though Houndmouth’s first album, From the Hills Below the City, placed them among such prominent groups as The Lumineers and Mumford and Sons, the band used their second album to break out of their staid Americana mold. In doing so, they’ve created a more personal album. Little Neon Limelight is full of songs that share an embellished or romanticized view of their own experiences as opposed to the mostly fictional characters that comprised their first album. My Cousin Greg is partly inspired by Matt Myers’ real life cousin “Greg,” but mostly based on seedy extrapolations of this relative’s personality. The band opens with leisurely electric guitar riffs and the verse, “My cousin Greg, he’s a greedy son of a bitch.” The chorus is a harmony of “If you want to live the good life, you’d better stay away from the limelight.” It’s a song as swaggering and unhurried as Cousin Greg.

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Sedona, one the other hand, is more refined and ethereal. The band’s first single from the album is already receiving accolades and radio play across the country. “Hey little Hollywood, you’re gone but not you’re forgotten,” the band harmonizes. It’s hard not to sing along to this upbeat and nostalgic song.

Truly, every song on this album is a gem. It’s the kind of album you’ll want to purchase on vinyl. Houndmouth is a band that’s hard to pigeonhole into a genre, but their talent has earned them appearances on The Late Show with David Letterman and performances at SXSW. Their devoted fan base ensures each venue is packed. Catch them on tour now nationwide.

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#FlashTag: Morning Studies

#FlashTag: Morning Studies

Monologging.org invites you to help create collaborative flash fiction. The following picture-inspired story, featuring photography by Monologging artist, Ronaldo Aguiar, needs to be completed by Saturday, May 23rd. Every day, different authors around the world will be selected to contribute the next line. Find out how to submit your twist to the evolving plot by visiting the #FlashTag Submission Guidelines… Submit Free!

Photo by Ronaldo Aguiar

Photo by Ronaldo Aguiar

 

 

 

 

Morning Studies

#FlashTag @monologging @ I was out of time.

#FlashTag@ After too many sleepless nights, too many days tearing out my hair, I felt calm.

#FlashTag@ Fear of failure had had its way with me. Exhaustion remedied my anxiety, but I needed to refuel. This was my last shot.

#FlashTag@ My phone rang. “Hello?” I answered. “Meet me at Buck’s Diner, 9AM. I have the test,” Bill said. Then he hung up.

#FlashTag@ No time to shower. I dressed & hurried to the diner. Bill sat in a booth, munching crisp bacon. He saw me & grinned.

#FlashTag@ No guilt. No conscience. A little cheat toward big things. No food, No room. Stomach full of knots: Small price.

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Strangers Gate (Invitation)

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Unused scene from “Idle in September.” India Ink and Acrylic Painting by Diana Muller

Strangers Gate

-An Invitation by Jeffrey F. Barken

 

Man in hat—
Ten Taps on drums,
“Testing, testing”
Mic unplugged.

Spring musicians
Back from winter,
Hear them ramble
Sweet-jazz season.

The city is tuning up for fireworks. Perfect summers last a century before we’re weary. Reminds me, in the beginning, Diana Muller and I did plan to publish Idle in September. She’d read my novel about a bluegrass band that goes on tour after 9/ll. She liked the story well enough to draw some sketches…. But the book was for scrap. There were holes, characters were underdeveloped and the plot was overwritten. I had no patience to revise. Besides, I was already writing All the Lonely Boys in New York.

So it goes. One book grows out of the other. Countless characters evolve, composing an alternate reality. Often their adventures connect or intersect. There are also dead ends. In All The Lonely Boys in New York, the narrator, Myles Fletcher, begins writing Idle in September, believing the book represents his apology to his best friend, Ari Shultz, whom he has betrayed. Constantly plotting his novel with escapist energy, Myles begins pinning scraps of paper to the walls of his apartment and later drawing directly on the surface. His destructive recklessness reveals a tangled web of emotion-laden poetic fragments.

 

strangers gate e-inviteA multimedia novel charts trails of creative energy. Diana drew several versions of the cover before we settled on a final design. She has also created numerous ink stamps to adorn the pages of the printed book. These small graphics interact with the novel’s materialism, heightening the reader’s sensitivity to small objects with thematic significance.

Meanwhile, Dara Lorenzo has included Diana’s drawings in her photo prints, creating introspective collages with unique intensity.

Witness a novel come to life this summer. Join us at the Grand Street Gallery, (278 Grand Street, NYC, NY, 10002) June 25th-27th for an interactive multimedia experience, book signings and a round of “monologue.” Soundtrack opening night provided by Sweet Megg & the Wayfarers.

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#FlashTag: Helpless

#FlashTag: Helpless

Monologging.org invites you to help create collaborative flash fiction. The following picture-inspired story, featuring artwork by Monologging artist, Michael Hassoun, needs to be completed by Saturday, May 16th. Every day, different authors around the world will be selected to contribute the next line. Find out how to submit your twist to the evolving plot by visiting the #FlashTag Submission Guidelines… Submit Free!

Photograph by Michael Hassoun

Photograph by Michael Hassoun

 

 

 

 

 

Helpless

 

 

 

#FlashTag @monologging The girls heard screaming. Someone was hurt. They couldn’t go to him. The door was locked.

#FlashTag@ Their tiny fingers gripped the high window sill. They could barely peer in.

#FlashTag@j The lights flickered. Dark eclipsed white. The man stopped screaming. “How can he sleep?” Lara asked her sister.

#FlashTag @monologging “I don’t think he’s sleeping, Lara,” Clem said. She put her arms around her sister.# 

# @ They always said “white vans & candy,” never mentioning chatrooms, chloroform & regret. The man’s breath returned.

# @JemmaMarieBeggs “Come on,” Clem said, taking hold of her sister’s hand. They turned toward home. Behind them the door swung open.

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The Girl With All the Gifts

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The Girl With All The Gifts

-Book Reviewed by Jemma Beggs

Rarely has an author used the writer’s golden rule of  “Show, don’t tell” to such dazzling effect as M.R.Carey, in his sublime novel, The Girl with All the Gifts. Set in a dystopian future, a fungal infection has ravaged the majority of humanity. When the fungus hits, humans transform into near-invincible flesh-eating machines called “hungries.” Readers are on a treacherous journey. A group of survivors and a young girl named Melanie—the “girl with all the gifts” must venture through a rapidly unravelling, and strange universe.

Narratives that switch perspectives from chapter to chapter often frustrate readers, however, M.R. Carey has used the device expertly, telling his tale through the eyes of multiple characters. In this way, he exposes the raw thoughts and emotions of a community on edge. Principally, we see the world through the eyes of Melanie, a little girl who is unaware that she is actually a “hungry.” In this way, we get to view things from a unique perspective as Melanie has never seen the outside world before and knows nothing of pre-apocalyptic life, so everything is a wonder to her. Gifted with a genius IQ and the best traits of both humans and hungries, Melanie is perfectly placed to help find a cure to this deadly infection.

Whilst her mind may be far superior for a girl of her age, at heart Melanie is an insecure child desperate to be loved by her teacher, Miss Justineau.  She adores Miss Justineau and believes that “there can’t be anyone better or kinder or lovelier… anywhere in the world.” Miss Justineau is the only teacher who treats Melanie as a child rather than a monster. Melanie hardly comprehends her teacher’s reasons, nevertheless, she responds to the attention and kindness with adulation, conveying her strong desire to protect Miss Justineau; who makes her feel “like the most important person in the world.” For her part, Miss Justineau develops an affection for Melanie despite the dangers of such a relationship, risking her life on more than one occasion to protect her from harm.

A participant in an experimental operation to learn more about the minds of hungries, Helen Justineau is a damaged yet headstrong woman. She battles the demons of her past and present while constantly hiding from the morality of her actions. She is in constant conflict with head scientist Caroline Caldwell—a cold-hearted and obsessive doctor, only content when she is busy extracting brains from live hungries. Leading the group is the decisive Sargent Ed Parks, who bears responsibility for keeping the group alive. Parks is aided by the young and inexperienced Private Kierran Gallagher.

Each character is fully developed, enhancing the setting and the group dynamic. There are no clichéd heroes or villains in this drama, and the author so brilliantly describes the English landscape that apocalypse fearing Britains are wary of the plot. Could something like this really transpire? Thankfully, despite the book’s aspects of familiarity, ‘The Girl with All the Gifts’ couldn’t be described as anything other than original. This is far more than your run of the mill zombie apocalypse novel. The virus that infects the hungries is rooted in scientific fact with a sinister twist plausible enough to be truly terrifying.

Ophiocordyceps unilateralis is an actual fungus which infects a specific species of ant, attacking the nervous systems and altering their behavioural patterns. The fungus explodes through the head of the insect – “a phallic sporangium skull-fucking the dying insect from the inside” and shedding thousands of spores which rapidly spread when the insect dies. Known as a ‘zombie fungus,’ M.R.Carey takes this gruesome infection and allows it to “claw its way to the top of the evolutionary tree.” His Hungries are chilling in the extreme. They exist completely immobile until jolted awake by sudden movement, loud noises, body heat or the scent of human flesh. They will then run indefinitely at an unrelenting pace until they catch their prey. Immune to pain and sprouting grey spores from their often rotting bodies, these beasts are everyone’s worst nightmare.

Readers will be terrified when the group of non-infected humans are forced to wander through cities in search of shelter at night. Sergeant Parks’s instructions are clear: “We’re almost bound to see hungries, and to be in their line of sight. What you want to do is not trigger them. Move slowly and smoothly. Don’t look them directly in the eye. Don’t make any loud or sudden noises. As far as you can, you blend into the landscape.” Covered in E-Blocker, a chemical designed to mask human smell from the hungries, the group is able to walk straight past these monsters without alerting them, so long as they keep their movements slow and remain silent. Following the humans into this heart of darkness, knowing at any second one wrong move could signal a doomed chase, sends chills down the spine.

As the novel proceeds, the horror only increases. The group encounters hungries who have retained tiny characteristics of their former humanity. An infected woman pushes a pram containing a skeleton of a baby down a deserted street and a rotting man rocks in his bed, singing the name of a long lost loved one. These haunting glimpses reveal depths of character residing in the monsters. They are still tenuously linked to humanity. Both fear and pity punctuate the prose.

“Which weighs the most Helen? Which will do the most good in the end? Your compassion or my commitment to my work?” Dr. Caldwell demands of Miss Justineau in one climactic scene. Fear of mortality drives this daunting plot, prompting the questions: can humans still be referred to as such when they’ve lost their humanity, and what atrocities are justified in the name of knowledge? With its powerful characterisation, terrifying monsters and a chillingly convincing theory for the future of the human race, this is one zombie apocalypse thriller that truly sinks its teeth in.

 

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#FlashTag: Ghost Ship

#FlashTag: Ghost Ship

Monologging.org invites you to help create collaborative flash fiction. The following picture-inspired story needs to be completed by Saturday, May 9th. A new line will be added daily by different authors from around the world. Find out how to submit your twist to the evolving plot by visiting the #FlashTag Submission Guidelines… Submit Free!

Photo by Jeffrey F. Barken

Photo by Jeffrey F. Barken

 

Ghost Ship

#FlashTag @monologging “Fishermen towed her in,” Bugsby said. “Soggy blokes spied her adrift, not a soul aboard.”

#FlashTag @monologging “What happened to the crew?” Joe asked. “They’ve vanished?”  # # #

#FlashTag @NairobiCollins Months earlier: “I could have sworn I parked it right here.” “Maybe it went home.” “A boat…homesick!” “…….Maybe?”

#FlashTag@ 3,247 miles away a solitary satin glove floated on the crests of the ocean towards the shores of The Lost Island.

#FlashTag@ Kurt washed ashore in the tide. His eyes burned from the salt. He gripped the coarse white sand and coughed up seawater.

#FlashTag@ He opened his mouth to speak, to cry out, but the only thing to escape his lips was a name: Lara.

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Big Screen Streaming: Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon

Big Screen Streaming: Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon

-Film Reviewed by Roger Market-

 

The wǔxiá (WOO-SHYAH) or martial arts branch of Chinese cinema is traditionally separated into the genres of kung fu and swordplay. Ang Lee’s Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon is one of the most famous and successful examples of the latter, at least in the Western world. Many critics misinterpret the genre, regarding such works as silly, unrealistic action films with people flying around and walking on water. But these tropes ought to be expected. Chinese swordplay movies are better categorized as fantasy rather than action (in other words, the Chinese equivalent of swords and sorcery). The supernatural elements of Chinese swordplay films relate belief in a harmonious relationship with nature, duty, honor, and humanity. A warrior who fights under a particular code—protecting the weak or making sacrifices out of loyalty—can easily bend nature to his or her will. An enemy who has learned how to do the same, however, represents a protagonist’s most formidable foe.

Set in 1779, China is in the 43rd year of the Qing Dynasty. A murderer named Jade Fox is running free. When the Green Destiny sword is stolen from its new home in Beijing, the sword’s former master, Li Mu Bai, entrusts female warrior Yu Shu Lien to recover the relic weapon. These two protagonists have a complicated history and it’s clear that they’re in love. Meanwhile, Yu Shu Lien meets Jen Yu, a young aristocrat who desperately wishes to free herself from an impending arranged marriage. Jen seems to covet Yu Shu Lien’s exciting lifestyle, as she has deep romantic notions about true love and going off on an adventure of her own. By now, viewers sense that Jen was in on the sword heist; if only to cure her boredom. Remarkably, she’s a skilled warrior, holding her own in battle, even against the older, wiser Yu Shu Lien.

While the movie is largely about retrieving the Green Destiny, the sword itself is a McGuffin. The real story lies in the gender dynamics and the Wudang fighting tradition. Women are not allowed to learn the Wudang method, which is exactly why Jade Fox wants to master the art. It’s also the reason she killed Li Mu Bai’s master many years ago. Jade Fox stole the Wudang text, but since she’s illiterate, she could only learn from the pictures. She shared the manual with Jen, who has secretly studied the words to learn the entirety of the Wudang fighting style. Li Mu Bai recognizes this style and offers to teach her, but Jen pushes him away just as she will continue to disregard those who are trying to help her escape Jade Fox’s murderous shadow.

Jade sets the tone for the rest of the film when, during a fight, she tells Li Mu Bai, “Your master underestimated us women.” This line foreshadows everything the viewer will learn about women in this movie but also underscores the anger that Jade carries with her. Time and again, the traditions and secrets are kept from her, forcing her to take drastic measures. Her pain is palpable, and Pei-pei Cheng is a delight to watch as these layers unravel. Likewise, Michelle Yeoh and Ziyi Zhang are wonderful in their roles as Yu Shu Lien and Jen Yu, respectively. Although Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon has several leading men, including the indomitable Yun-Fat Chow as Li Mu Bai, it’s essentially a women’s swordplay film. Each leading lady delivers on a promise for highly proficient, high-speed action.

As of this writing, you can watch Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon on both Netflix and Amazon Prime. The long-awaited sequel (Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon: The Green Legend) will be released exclusively on Netflix on August 28, 2015. Look for Michelle Yeoh to return as Yu Shu Lien in a story that takes place 20 years after the events of the first movie . . . This reviewer anxiously awaits the release and will post a full report, as they say, Big Screen Streaming.

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