#FlashTag: Encounter

Monologging.org invites you to help create collaborative flash fiction. The following picture-inspired story, needs to be completed by Saturday, October 3rd. Every day, different authors around the world will be selected to contribute the next line. Find out how to submit your twist to the evolving plot by visiting the #FlashTag Submission Guidelines… Submit Free!

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Encounter

 

 

#FlashTag @monologging # Specialists were working tirelessly to decode a cryptic message beamed to earth.

#FlashTag@ Indecipherable enigma, the experts were baffled. Days passed. Radar detected a looming shadow.

#FlashTag@ A blackout ensued. Governments succumbed to chaos. The army searched the sky, desperate to make contact.

#FlashTag@diranasaurus After weeks of searching, the quiet sky finally spoke to the chaotic earth. “Hello. We’re here.”

#FlashTag@ The voice was quiet, calm. And entirely too familiar.

#FlashTag @monologging There was nostalgia in the stars. Some prayed, others rioted. Fires raged. Few lucky souls dared leave.

 

 

 

 

 

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#FlashTag: The Meeting

Monologging.org invites you to help create collaborative flash fiction. The following picture-inspired story, needs to be completed by Saturday, September 26th. Every day, different authors around the world will be selected to contribute the next line. Find out how to submit your twist to the evolving plot by visiting the #FlashTag Submission Guidelines… Submit Free!

Photo by Jeffrey F. Barken

Photo by Jeffrey F. Barken

 

 

 

The Meeting

 

 

 

#FlashTag @monologging The Phone rang. “Meet me on the tenth floor fire escape,” the wheezy voice said.

#FlashTag@ I’ve been waiting for this call, (Running) I get to the fire escape. “Come out! Where are you?”

#FlashTag@ The sun had set. No twilight afterglow, only shadows fading in the dark. Across, I saw the red tip of a cigarette.

#FlashTag@ “So you’re here.” An inane comment from my lips, of course. Her cigarette flared orange, red, orange, in response.

#FlashTag@ “Come out of there. Let me see you,” I called. “Why did you come back?”

#FlashTag@Monologging “Isn’t it enough to know I’m back?” My sister said, putting out her cigarette. “You know I can’t be seen in public.”

 

 

 

 

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Prandially Yours: Robert NYC

Prandially Yours

-A New Monthly Column by Joshua Wanger, Featuring NYC Restaurant Reviews-

ROBERT • COLUMBUS CIRCLE, NEW YORK—This unpretentious, fine dining establishment, set at the top of the Museum of Arts and Design, is a visually exciting culinary treat. The impressive dining room features chic blades of light dangling from the ceiling and a wall-sized three-dimensional rendering of a deciduous tree that grows and loses leaves through rapidly shifting seasons. The colorful lighting casts contrasting blues, oranges, and pinks, foreshadowing an exciting menu. Floor-to-ceiling windows comprise one wall, providing clear views up Broadway and into Central Park. Diners curious enough to look up at the mirrored ceiling tiles observe the blur of pedestrians and vehicles circling Gaetano Russo’s statue of Columbus below. As the sun sets, city lights show through the window, presenting a stunning backdrop for a dinner prepared by the very capable Chef Luisa Fernandes.

A fun atmosphere prevails in the dining room. The wait staff are amiable and attentive without being overbearing. The flamboyant character serving this reviewer drew smiles from around the room. On a beautiful Friday evening in the city, the restaurant is filled, but dinner is not rushed. Pushing the wonderful atmosphere to its logical extreme, a jazz pianist and bassist duo riff for the dining room.

Begin your evening with one of Robert’s specialty cocktails. The “Mad Manhattan,” a sweet concoction composed of Woodford Reserve, blood orange vermouth, and an Amarena cherry, is a delightfully rich pairing for a three-course meal.

The amuse-bouche, this evening a carrot–jicama wrap with cucumber cream, was simple. A light, clean flavor, and satisfying crunch distinguishes this appetizer, paving the way for the first course: tomato and mango gazpacho. Bursting with umami and salty-sweetness, this finely seasoned and smoothly puréed, chilled soup works perfectly with the dollop of mango sorbet centered in the dish. Though the portions are large, you will not waste a drop of this soup.

The main entrée, a summery risotto, arrives incredibly hot and perfectly cooked. The chef prepares a generous portion of fresh sweet corn with asparagus mixed into the all’onda rice and topped with shavings of Parmesan, giving the dish a seasonal, savory flavor. Like the gazpacho, the portion is large and filling.
Assuming you can eat another bite, cheesecake topped with passion fruit foam and surrounded by caramel and dots of guava liquid gel round out the meal. The showy foam and gel make a bold presentation but are not too sweet and do not overpower the luscious cheesecake. The clear caramel gently binds the bright, tart fruit and the creamy, rich cheesecake flavors together, lending complexity to the dish. Compliments of the chef, a small glass of bubbly Moscato arrives.

Robert calls for repeat visits. Restaurant goers seeking a casual, yet fine dining experience will delight in the menu and atmosphere. The view is spectacular, prompting some picture taking, but this does not detract from the experience. On the contrary, each flash amplifies the fun, capturing smiles and the friendly atmosphere the staff works hard to cultivate. Call as far in advance as possible to reserve seats by the expansive windows.

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#FlashTag: Emergency

Monologging.org invites you to help create collaborative flash fiction. The following picture-inspired story, needs to be completed by Saturday, September 19th. Every day, different authors around the world will be selected to contribute the next line. Find out how to submit your twist to the evolving plot by visiting the #FlashTag Submission Guidelines… Submit Free!

Photo by Jeffrey F. Barken

Photo by Jeffrey F. Barken

 

 

 

Emergency

 

#FlashTag @monologging Lola leaned over Grandpa. “He’s not breathing!” She yelled.

#FlashTag @monologging “We shouldn’t be here,” Aiden, Lola’s kid brother said. He was shivering. “Nobody knows Grandpa lives here.”

#FlashTag @JeffreyFBarken Fright implied flight. Brother & Sister fled the abandoned building where Grandpa lay dying.

#FlashTag@itsjaykyall Outside, Lola called 911 from a payphone. Aiden held her shirt sleeve & stared at the boarded-up building.

#FlashTag @monologging Sirens howled. Upstairs, in the dark, Grandpa’s eyes opened. He gasped for air. End of the road, eternal refugee….

#FlashTag @JeffreyFBarken Grandpa crawled to the door. With the last of his strength, he locked the portal. He breathed. The medics knocked.

 

 

 

 

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Slow Down

Slow-DownSlow Down

-Book Reviewed by Diana Mumford

Beautiful actresses with mysterious tattoos, powerful drugs, and the promise of fame characterize Lee Matthew Goldberg’s Slow Down. When Noah Spaeth loses his job as a talent booker, he is unconcerned. Born with a silver spoon in his mouth, he views his new found freedom as an opportunity to achieve fame. Of his writing, Noah says, “I’m about to create something that’ll blow people away, and no one can stop me.” Although he is college educated, Noah’s Holden Caulfield–like attitude glorifies the instinct to drop out and empowers his rampant ego. An unpredictable adventure awaits readers.

Eager and inspired, Noah soon sits down to write a New York Times bestseller, only to encounter debilitating writer’s block. He overcomes this difficulty by trying to impress hotshot Dominick Bombach, an actor, director, and producer who holds the key to Noah’s success. Dominick is making what he believes to be a revolutionary film. When asked about his script, Dominick replies, “It’s all in here. That’s where I’m keeping it. To create a complete idea is to fill it with bullshit.” Ever the narcissist, Dominick  asks Noah to take part in the project only after the aspiring screenwriter woos the established producer by writing a short story based on Dominick’s first successful film. It seems like Noah’s ticket to the big-time is sealed, but Dominick’s egotistical personality rivals Noah’s.

Unfortunately for Noah, Dominick is also dating Nevie, Noah’s long-time friend and hopelessly unattainable crush. Noah recalls of Nevie, “Back then her cruel words had made me want to kiss her even more.” In spite of his self-loving attitude, Noah is a hopeless romantic, and his relationship with Nevie shows that, buried underneath his conceited exterior, he has a semblance of humanity.

Dominick and Noah’s work dynamic is nerve wracking. Noah thinks little of Dominick but panders to his every whim, hoping to steal fame. “I became confident in steadily manipulating him, which was easy enough to do as long as I called him ‘a genius’ about three times a day,” Noah reflects. Dominick, of course, is temperamental and prone to tantrums when he doesn’t get his way. When Noah hatches a heinous plot to overthrow Dominick as top dog, he uncovers his mentor’s clandestine dealings in the process.

The novel is not without its flaws. Slow Down features an awkward framing device—a story within a story that is interrupted by a full recount of Dominick’s film, Detached. Likewise, some readers will find the principle characters somewhat unlikable. Despite these disruptions, the book is an enjoyable read, if only to see whether the characters receive their comeuppances. The subplots concerning mystery women with matching tattoos and a new drug coursing through the city, are slightly ridiculous, but add a provocative twist, rendering this novel a page turner.

Will Noah get what he deserves in the end? Are his actions against Dominick redeemable? Readers will decide. Regardless, part mystery, part dysfunctional love story, Slow Down is one fast-paced read you can’t put down. Available from New Pulp Press.

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#FlashTag: Unrest

Monologging.org invites you to help create collaborative flash fiction. The following picture-inspired story, needs to be completed by Saturday, September 12th. Every day, different authors around the world will be selected to contribute the next line. Find out how to submit your twist to the evolving plot by visiting the #FlashTag Submission Guidelines… Submit Free!

Photo by Jeffrey F. Barken

Photo by Jeffrey F. Barken

 

 

 

#FlashTag: Unrest

 

#FlashTag @monologging Lea was exhausted when she came in from the protest.

#FlashTag @onthesidetreas1 The protest going on now for weeks, each one getting larger. You can hear! “We are The change”

#FlashTag@JeffreyFBarken Brandon watched Lea unravel her scarf & set down her sign. “Some men were here looking for you,” he said.

#FlashTag@ Lea avoided eye contact. “There were riots last night. A fire broke out. Tell me where you were!” Brandon demanded.

#FlashTag@ “I was no where near the fire when it started,” Lea said. “But before it started?” Brandon asked, furious.

 

 

 

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#FlashTag: Time Warp

#FlashTag: Time Warp

Monologging.org invites you to help create collaborative flash fiction. The following picture-inspired story, featuring artwork by Monologging artist, Michael Hassoun, needs to be completed by Saturday, September 5th. Every day, different authors around the world will be selected to contribute the next line. Find out how to submit your twist to the evolving plot by visiting the #FlashTag Submission Guidelines… Submit Free!

Photograph by Michael Hassoun

Photograph by Michael Hassoun

 

 

 

#FlashTag: Time Warp

 

#FlashTag @monologging The wind picked up.

#FlashTag @onthesidetreas1 “Hard to think” the wind continuously blowing, the air & sky filling with gas. People are losing their minds.

#FlashTag@ Eli closed his eyes. Sand streaked rewind, blurring yesterday, weeks ago, months & years, as decades curved past.

#FlashTag@ Eli reached out, grasping at memories. He paused at Mama making cookies. This was before flour was hard to come by.

#FlashTag@ The air smelled sweet. The blur ceased to whirl. Eli’s Mama continued her work without noticing his presence.

 

 

 

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Big Screen Streaming: Back to the Future

Big Screen Streaming: Back to the Future

-In his monthly column, Roger Market explores the magic of the Back to the Future Trilogy-

On October 21, 2015, fans of the Back to the Future trilogy will be able to watch the films in select theaters for one night only. This event commemorates the 30th anniversary of the first movie’s release. The date was planned to coincide with an event from the series: Back to the Future Part II’s destination date when our heroes travel from 1985 to 2015. Why does a thirty-year-old movie have so much staying power and influence? A time travel story on the surface, Back to the Future is really more about taking control of one’s destiny, making something of yourself, and not letting the world get you down. Most viewers can relate to these themes. Short, teenage Marty McFly (Michael J. Fox) is decades younger than the white-haired Dr. Emmett Brown (Christopher Lloyd), but they are a compatible duo whose constant friendship takes the film to new heights. And the writing, at least for the first movie in the franchise, is downright inspiring.

The creative team behind Back to the Future makes expert use of foreshadowing throughout the movie. During the intro, viewers are treated to a video tour of Dr. Brown’s lab, complete with hundreds of clocks, various inventions that fail to work properly, framed photographs of inventors, a car commercial on the radio, and a TV news report about plutonium theft. As those who have already seen the film know, all of these elements will be important.

The setups keep coming, oftentimes with comedic effect. Marty strolls into Dr. Brown’s home to use the guitar amplifier and sound system. A hopeless fan of loud 80’s music, he ramps the volume, unintentionally destroying the speaker in the process. Moments later, he receives a phone call from Brown. “That reminds me, Marty,” Dr. Brown says after a brief initial exchange, “you better not hook up to the amplifier. There’s a slight possibility of overload.” As Marty stares at the irreparably damaged sound system, he says he’ll “keep that in mind.” When the clocks in the lab all strike eight o’clock at once, Dr. Brown reveals that they are exactly twenty-five minutes slow, and thus begins the movie’s infatuation with time and disobedience: Marty is late for school, and his principal has it in for him. Guess who gets detention?

During that opening-scene phone call, Dr. Brown asks Marty to meet him at the local mall later that night. When Marty finally arrives, Brown reveals the reason for their meeting, blowing Marty’s mind: He has created the world’s first time travel device—from a DeLorean, a “classy,” though somewhat impracticle automobile that runs on plutonium. The source of fuel? Brown has stolen the radioactive material from a group of Libyans who wanted him to build them a bomb. Suddenly, all of the setups from the opening scene fall into place. When the Libyans show up to kill Dr. Brown, a distraught Marty takes the DeLorean as his getaway vehicle and inadvertently disobeys the laws of nature, traveling back to 1955, the year his parents first met, kissed, and fell in love.

Now, the movie begins to employ dramatic irony for both suspense and comedic effect. When Marty accidentally disrupts his parents’ courtship, he shifts his teenage mother’s attentions from his father, George McFly, to himself. Thus begins Marty’s seemingly never-ending quest to get his parents together. To track his progress, Marty inspects a photograph he brought back from the future. His siblings, pictured in the photograph, are slowly disappearing, evidence that he has disrupted the time-space continuum. If Marty can’t get his parents together, as they were destined, eventually he too will start to disappear from the photo and then from reality. Luckily, he has contacted the 1955 version of Dr. Brown to explain his predicament. Doc, elated to learn that he has finally invented “something that works,” promises to help Marty fix history and get “back to the future!”

During Marty’s quest, he continues to disobey the rules, putting him in hot water at every turn and earning him an enemy in local tough guy, the young Biff Tanner. One of these early confrontations is the now-classic chase scene in which Marty zips along on a “board with wheels” while Biff follows in his car. In the end, Biff eats Marty’s dust—along with some other organic matter. Marty’s mother, Lorraine, looks on with unknowingly incestuous admiration.

Failing to get his parents to fall in love initially, Marty hatches a Hail Marry plan to take his young mother to the high school’s Enchantment Under the Sea dance, at which he’ll “take advantage” of her so that George can step in to defend her. With any luck, George will win her love, and they will have their first kiss at that same dance, just as they are supposed to (the present Lorraine recounts this story back in 1985 to the annoyance of Marty’s sister, who had already heard it “a million times”). Meanwhile, Dr. Brown works on a plan to transport Marty safely back to 1985. The last act of the film is an incredible example of cinematic suspense, with Marty, George, and Dr. Brown thwarting each new obstacle only to find another one in its place.

The epic time gap that allows Marty to meet his parents as teenagers contributes to the film’s popularity both on its release and thirty years later. Lea Thompson, Crispin Glover, Thomas F. Wilson, and Christopher Lloyd turn in stellar performances as Lorraine, George, Biff, and Dr. Brown, respectively, in both 1955 and 1985. The movie’s twist ending is fun, too, allowing these actors to shine once again. Adding to the popularity of Back to the Future is the film’s fantastic soundtrack. The track list includes “The Power of Love” and “Mr. Sandman,” as well as a performance of “Earth Angel (Will You Be Mine)” at the school dance by the fictional band Marvin Berry and the Starlighters. The pièce de résistance, however is Marty McFly’s anachronistic and shocking rendition of “Johnny B. Goode” when the band needs an emergency guitarist. Although Fox did not record the vocals himself, his stage presence is legendary, and the performance is unforgettable.

While Back to the Future became a classic for many reasons, viewers will especially remember the movie’s lightning-struck clock tower and, of course, the comically souped up time-traveling DeLorean. Indeed, the fate of these two iconic symbols is yet another example of the screenwriting mastery at work in the film: Several early references to the clock tower’s 1955 demise eventually lead to the lightning strike itself, which the 1955 Dr. Brown identifies as the only way to generate enough power to send Marty back to the future in the absence of plutonium to fuel the time machine. It’s easy to see why stakes this high and writing this entertaining could never be contained in only one movie. Consequently, dedicated fans of the Back to the Future franchise will be in for a long night on October 21, when the exciting triple play hits theaters for a limited engagement.

Check back in early October for my reviews of Back to the Future Part II and Back to the Future Part III, just days before the anniversary screenings!

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Empire State Days III

Free eBook for Monologging Followers & Book Tour Reflections by Jeffrey F. Barken

Weekdays, after work, I steer through the summer haze awaiting the dim light before sunset. Then, sirens announce the “Golden Hour Rush,” witching twilight when New Yorkers seek books.

Since bringing All the Lonely Boys in New York out in June, I’ve been doing circles around Bryant Park, the trek downtown past Madison, Union and Washington Square. I ride the A train home.

“Bet you enjoy a good novel now and again,” I say, introducing myself to the folks seated on benches. On a permanent book tour, I’ve been doing this pitch a long time already, starting back in Israel, now in New York…

There are always some who say, “no,” and shoo me away, but most will at least take a look.

Yesterday afternoon, I tried my luck in Central Park. There’s a world a-spin in the wonderland. Nostalgic on a Friday, queue the blues from last summer, dreaming hours—timeless walks.

Surprise! The first person I asked had already read the book. “Jeffrey Barken?” she placed me. The woman’s name was Robin. I remembered her now. She said the book made her think about what happens to people in seclusion, how badly we’ll seek whatever company is the first to make us feel at home. “Even on the fringes,” she said, suggesting there’s shameful comfort when men and women share terror as a group.

I got over my embarrassment for not immediately recognizing the stranger. Tell you the truth; her name did ring a bell. I even remember where we were sitting when I sold her the book. That table east of the summer stage, down from Holden’s merry-go-round, where Edith Piaf and Billie Holliday set the mood.

The day we’d met, I asked Robin, “Do you spell it with a Y.” I wanted to make sure before I signed her book.

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Illustration from “All the Lonely Boys in New York” by Diana Muller

We both agreed the city gets small. She asked some questions about the collaborative aspects of Monologging. She’d found the concept of an illustrated novel and Diana Muller’s illustrations very engaging. I thanked her for her feedback and asked her to write a review. She promised she would but warned she’s busy. Robin is working three different jobs to stay afloat…

At last we parted, still strangers, but amused by chance and aware we’re fated to meet more than once.

As I walked to Strawberry Fields, I conjured Professor Murphy’s plot. In All the Lonely Boys in New York, my villain tests the world’s devotion to John Lennon and his lot. Asking: “Do we still believe the Beatles?” he plans bloodshed in the park. I thought of those journalists killed this week. It’s always the ones singing; “all you need is love…” whose happiness meets the warm gun.

I sat down and had my lunch across from the “IMAGINE” mosaic. The guitarists we’re arguing over who had the right to play the shift. They snickered, bitterly aware their scene couldn’t persist without drawing scorn.

“Good, it’s this guy,” a roller-blader said, sitting down next to me when the music resumed “The other one always plays Paul McCartney songs,” he explained. I wondered why the Grump didn’t lower his voice when he criticized the musicians. He was awfully loud.

The roller-blader unfastened his helmet and stretched his leg. I ignored him and ate my plum. Tourists were posing for the classic New York City photo-op: the “meditation shot” filmed in front of the pop culture shrine where the roses strew.

The guitarist sang “Imagine” in a voice that didn’t carry, but still amused. I paid the man a dollar for playing while I ate, then carried on. I walked past the sprinklers, down the Poet’s Walk, where tourists sat for caricatures, and others listened to the jazzman’s sax. I showed the book to an older man. He said he’d left his wallet at home for his stroll, but that he’d do more than buy the book. He asked for my email and promised to send a link.

I thanked him. We parted. Further down the path I sold a book to a girl who used to work for Lehman Brothers. We talked about the crash in 2008. How so many of us lost a year when there were no jobs and no credit. Many of us still lament all that energy gone to waste.

“Thank you, enjoy,” I said a cordial goodbye.

“Good luck,” she answered.

I walked down the steps toward the lake where there’s always a wedding staged. One of those dream girls dressed in white lace and frills hugged her man while the cameras flashed another fairy tale memory. Behind them, a circus act was starting up. A starry-dressed man blew big bubbles; his hair was wild. I blinked, and it was summer, 2008 again. I’ll never forget the day I jammed banjo with that drummer in front of Bethesda Fountain, the kids swinging hula-hoops, that first dollar I made having fun.

“When you play the park, you’re paid to practice,” the busking veteran told me after our show. “Bring your best, try your worst.”

Onward. I passed the pond where the model boats sail, and the Mad Hatter laughs, stopping short of the Met.

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Illustration from “All the Lonely Boys in New York” by Diana Muller

“Few parks are perfect,” I remembered prose. “Yet I’ve always felt I could find the whole world inside Central Park…” –Myles wanders here, pg. 27. I remembered the scene, I could relive the novel, but I wasn’t Myles. I’m never Myles anymore.

I’m three months into the tour. The book is out there now; there’s nothing I can do besides quote Salinger. “Tell anybody anything and you start missing everybody.” That’s why All the Lonely Boys in New York is a free eBook this weekend. If you enjoy a good novel now and again, please have a look, download, and share.

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Post Photos by Diana Muller

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Empire State Days

Empire State Days II

 

 

 

 

 

#FlashTag: Neglected

#FlashTag: Neglected

Monologging.org invites you to help create collaborative flash fiction. The following picture-inspired story, needs to be completed by Saturday, August 29th. Every day, different authors around the world will be selected to contribute the next line. Find out how to submit your twist to the evolving plot by visiting the #FlashTag Submission Guidelines… Submit Free!

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#FlashTag: Neglected

 

#FlashTag @monologging “Long time back there was a family living in those woods.”

#FlashTag @itsjaykyall “Fire?” “No, wasn’t a fire. But something sure spooked them. They left in an awful hurry.”

#FlashTag @monologging “You afraid of ghosts?” Pat asked Grady. The big kid shook his head. “Where there’s treasure, I’m never scared.”

#FlashTag@ “Better get a move on then,” Pat said. “You got your pack?”

#FlashTag@ They trekked through the woods, toward the abandoned house. Twigs cracked. Glass crunched. The door creaked open.

#FlashTag@ Report filed: Boy missing. Grady found terrified, survival,his treasure. Pat,the ghost.The door open and waiting.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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